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1.
I think that the e-mail can be completely replaced by the letter, in addition to significant advances in technology, the e-mail on the network is much more convenient than the general correspondence, people do not need to use pen and paper to write environmental protection, good benefits, plus e-mailthe send secure much safer than the general epistles, the general epistles lost en route and transmission time is longer than e-mail, Furthermore email send a large range effective with a very short period of time to send to a recipient whoSo I think the e-mail can be completely replaced by the letter.

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First of all, I think that the young people spend too much time on the Internet, because many online games have attracted a lot of young people is now on the network, plus a wide range of Internet and no regulatory legislation, leading to a lot of young people are addicted and spend bigpart-time on the network. In addition, now the streets are a lot of cafes, young people from school when it is easy to contact these stores In addition, these stores do not prohibit people under the age of 18 to enter, plus cheap, so many young people spend a lot of time in the net road. Stay long and spend too much time on the Internet, will seriously affect the academic achievements of the young people, the school can not concentrate on listening to the book, even to the point of addiction, which may lead to reduced communication with friends, forming diseases. So I think that young people should not indulge or spend too much time on the Internet.

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1. I believes that e-mail can full replaced letter, except with technology of progress, network Shang of e-mail than General of letters convenient was more, people does not needs with paper and pen to writing, on environmental area has good large of benefits, plus e-mail of sent security degree than General letters security was more, General letters has may in sent en route lost and sent time than e-mail long, furthermore e-mail of sent range larger, can effective with very short of time sent to recipient who, So I think that e-mail can be completely replaced.


2. first of all, I think young people are spending too much time on the Internet, because currently there are a lot of online games has attracted a lot of young people, with a wide range of Internet and there is no regulatory legislation, led to many young people indulged in and spent most of his time on the network. In addition, now there are a lot of Internet cafes on the street, young people from school, it is easy to contact these stores, the stores did not prohibit persons under 18 years of age to enter, plus cheap, many young people spend a lot of time on the network. Stay for a long time and spend too much time on the network, will seriously affect the academic achievement of young people, school cannot concentrate on hearing, and even reached the point of addiction, this may result in reduced communication with friends, disorders. So I think that young people should not be indulged in or spend too much time on the network.

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1. In my opinion, letters can be completely replaced by e-mails. With the advance of science and technology, it is more convenient to use e-mails instead of letters. First, people do not need pens and paper when typing an email. It contributes a lot to the environmental protection. Second, it is safer to send emails than send letters. Letters may be lost during delivery and it takes longer time to send a letter than an e-mail. Third, e-mails support a larger delivery area, and they can be effectively sent to the recipient in an extremely short time. Therefore, I think letters can be completely replaced by e-mails.

2. First of all, I think teenagers spend too much time on the Internet. As a variety of online games on the Internet have attracted many teenagers and there is not any legislation to take control of teenagers, many teenagers become addicted to the Internet and spend most of the time on the Internet. Apart from that, there are many Internet cafes in Hong Kong. It is very easy for teenagers to be in touch with these cafes. Besides, Internet cafes are cheap and do not prohibit teenagers who aged below 18 from using them. Thus many teenagers spend much time on the Internet. It will affect the academic results of the teenagers seriously. They cannot put attention to class. Some of them even be addicted to the Internet and this may result in reducing the time talking the friends or causing illness. Therefore, I think teenagers should not be addicted to the Internet or spend too much time on that.

不過都唔好怪我多口講一句...
呢兩篇野中間有logic error, 有point, 但無elaboration
而且時常有重複

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