yeung02 發表於 11-8-2008 17:04:28

我的屋邨(請多多批評)

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攝影器材:canon powershot S2 IS

[ 本帖最後由 yeung02 於 11-8-2008 17:18 編輯 ]

yeung02 發表於 12-8-2008 11:09:49

點解無人比評語或交流意見?Post 黎都無咩可以技術進步,咁多位比下意見啦....

§SpyShadow 發表於 12-8-2008 19:31:23

#1 out fo
#4 右上角的大廈破壞了整張相
#8 注意水平
#7,9, zoom/chop過?構圖很怪

yeung02 發表於 13-8-2008 10:49:42

thanks for your options![] 第7,9張係post上黎果時要手動拉細佢,所以d闊高比有d怪...

(#8 注意水平),e個批評好,有人已經話過我[]

好的批評常見,但係無用,唔好的批評先係進步的良藥

E-Media.Dennis 發表於 14-8-2008 16:11:22

原帖由 yeung02 於 11-8-2008 17:04 發表 http://www1.nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
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大部分相都係比較有紀錄式既味道... 未能表達到樓主你想表達 D 咩...
樓主記住影每幅相前諗清楚究竟影呢幅相究竟主角係邊個同埋係邊度...
個人覺得呢幅相能夠做到好似以下呢幅有淺景深或者用慢快門會比較好...



樓主繼續加油喇!! [] []

[ 本帖最後由 E-Media.Dennis 於 14-8-2008 16:14 編輯 ]

yeung02 發表於 15-8-2008 11:16:38

首先感謝你的意見,回應第一個問題.我個人認為,唔一定要張張相都用淺景深先可以特出主體,好似第一,三張咁,用一座公屋做background,特出(我的屋邨)係 一個有好多花草樹木的屋邨,有好多老人家,而且有好多張都係得公共屋邨先見到e.g#6(特出主題),不過你都講得正確,有好幾張真係唔夠特出主體,好果有多d background會唔會好d?

一大無謂一 發表於 20-8-2008 14:27:13

係咪良景邨呢...
我覺得第五張最有風味
第七張感覺好怪...
有偷窺感

yeung02 發表於 21-8-2008 19:43:58

良景邨你都知...第7張真係偷拍,等個伯伯合眼養神果一刻影,重有幾張無post出黎...

怕比人話唔敢行太近,好彩有12x...

你都post附近屋邨d相黎睇下,交流意見...

chen-i誠x 發表於 13-9-2008 14:08:21

=="我知道呢到邊到黎
我之前成日去既

劉海1992 發表於 25-9-2008 12:26:10

2相 好似有靚女 右邊 滑梯果個 點解 唔近影
你行過去 同佢講 我可唔可以 和你一起影張相 記住要有風度 和 自己要汁汁自己個樣子![]
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